Alone and wistful
Thoughts begin to float
Drifting, dreaming
Fingertips stroke my cheek
Energy coursing through each cell
Flowing with celestial love
Struggling through layers of consciousness
Awakening with wonder…
God, was that you
Who filled me with such pure tranquility
If only for a lifetime
Forsaken no more
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Wonderfully uplifting.
ReplyDeleteWonderful, especially loved how that moment lasted "if only for a lifetime." And great conclusion.
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is Everything I Lack
beautiful 55...love th intimacy...
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Such tenderness, excellent 55!
ReplyDeleteKeep the FUNNIES in your weekends!
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Beautiful as always!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. An inspiration. Thank you for sharing this. I loved this 55! Well done!
ReplyDelete/Jo.
Inspiring words. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThat is just priceless!!!
ReplyDeleteLove it.
Here's mine Take Pleasure - 101
Have a super terrific weekend.
Oh, Sherry, this was loving and renewing. We truly are forsaken no more. Have a wonderful weekend.
ReplyDeleteMom would say, a heartfelt prayer at bedtime, would be rewarded with a restful sleep.
ReplyDeleteYou can find my 55 at: My Invisibility
As everyone else, I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing your gift with us.
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ReplyDeletewhat amazing 55 poem,
beautiful!
There is great warmth and comfort in this. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the others--it's tender and warm and I love the idea of recognizing the extraordinary in the little things.
ReplyDeleteHere's mine: Coin Collectors
Wonderfully warm and intimate!
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is up here.
What a beautiful poem! Divinely tranquil and uplifting.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this. It is so peaceful.
ReplyDeleteThis puts me in a restful place, where I really need help to be in today. Thank you!
ReplyDeletePEACE!