Swaying on my seat down low
Spinning round and round
Rampant energy
Uphill…downhill
Rushed and wobbly
From there to here
Breathing
Seeing
Sampling
Hearing
Feeling
Falling…Hurting…Rising
Gasping
Perceiving
Savoring
Listening
Grasping
Channeled spirit
Cycling to and fro
Centered on my seat up high
Straight…level
Controlled and steady
From here to there
Write a story or poem with exactly 55 words
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22 comments:
Very nice! I felt the motion in this 55!
I’m up right HERE
Well spoke 'n. A good long bike ride brings the whole world back into perspective, does it not?
Love it!
i think i have travelled that road before...nicely done 55!
Queen is playing in my mind right now...
Excellent 55 My Dear!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Nice one! Great rhythm.
BART’S HEART – OVER THE MOON
I could feel the breezes blowing all around me as I cycle through life. Nice 55.
PG
Ah, now you've gone and reminded me of how much I miss my old bike. I kept it for years, hoping to ride it with my kids, but it had rusted away...
My 55 is School Lunch
Thanks for sharing this. It feels like a wild ride.
Now I want to go for a ride! This was great!
LOL! Yes!
I'm with G-Man; it does sort of make me think of Queen. :)
Thanks for doing Friday 55!
My own is posted right here.
Love biking. Great 55. My 55 will be HERE after midnight Pacific time.
an amazing journey in 55 words, glad i stopped by
That's quite a road. nicely done.
Mmmm, loved this. I miss being able to take my bike to go places... Too much snow and ice. I can't wait for Spring to come. Then I will be on the road again. :) Great 55! /Jo.
Such vivid imagery!! But with all the ups and downs, I think I'd have to change the 'hurting' to falling, 'hurling' rising...
Mine this week is another 'non-fiction' fictionalized version. Butt to naked butts
[if you care to read, scroll down below my Friday's Show n Tell piece]
Have a great weekend.
I could feel the wind in my face.
My 55: A Familiar Face
This is wonderfully done. I could feel the movements as I was reading. I hope you have a great weekend. My 55 is up
Makes me want to go for a bicycle ride.
Very nice!
Whee! What a ride! Well done!
I liked, so much going on in just 55
mines up.
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