Awakening Through Love

Awakening Through Love

Life in Motion





Swaying on my seat down low

Spinning round and round

Rampant energy



Uphill…downhill

Rushed and wobbly

From there to here



Breathing

Seeing

Sampling

Hearing

Feeling



Falling…Hurting…Rising



Gasping

Perceiving

Savoring

Listening

Grasping



Channeled spirit

Cycling to and fro

Centered on my seat up high



Straight…level

Controlled and steady

From here to there


Write a story or poem with exactly 55 words
Go see Mr. G if you'd like to play


(he knowsitall and counts 'em all too!)


22 comments:

Susan said...

Very nice! I felt the motion in this 55!
I’m up right HERE

Titanium said...

Well spoke 'n. A good long bike ride brings the whole world back into perspective, does it not?

Barbara said...

Love it!

Brian Miller said...

i think i have travelled that road before...nicely done 55!

g-man said...

Queen is playing in my mind right now...
Excellent 55 My Dear!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Linda - Nickers and Ink said...

Nice one! Great rhythm.

BART’S HEART – OVER THE MOON

Prayer Girl said...

I could feel the breezes blowing all around me as I cycle through life. Nice 55.

PG

Peter Stone said...

Ah, now you've gone and reminded me of how much I miss my old bike. I kept it for years, hoping to ride it with my kids, but it had rusted away...

My 55 is School Lunch

Syd said...

Thanks for sharing this. It feels like a wild ride.

Her Big Sad said...

Now I want to go for a ride! This was great!

Janna said...

LOL! Yes!
I'm with G-Man; it does sort of make me think of Queen. :)

Thanks for doing Friday 55!
My own is posted right here.

Monkey Man said...

Love biking. Great 55. My 55 will be HERE after midnight Pacific time.

clean and crazy said...

an amazing journey in 55 words, glad i stopped by

anthonynorth said...

That's quite a road. nicely done.

järnebrand said...

Mmmm, loved this. I miss being able to take my bike to go places... Too much snow and ice. I can't wait for Spring to come. Then I will be on the road again. :) Great 55! /Jo.

Hootin' Anni said...

Such vivid imagery!! But with all the ups and downs, I think I'd have to change the 'hurting' to falling, 'hurling' rising...

Mine this week is another 'non-fiction' fictionalized version. Butt to naked butts

[if you care to read, scroll down below my Friday's Show n Tell piece]

Have a great weekend.

Buzzard said...

I could feel the wind in my face.

My 55: A Familiar Face

jadey73 said...

This is wonderfully done. I could feel the movements as I was reading. I hope you have a great weekend. My 55 is up

Alice Audrey said...

Makes me want to go for a bicycle ride.

Mama Zen said...

Very nice!

PattiKen said...

Whee! What a ride! Well done!

Vodka Logic said...

I liked, so much going on in just 55

mines up.

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